When I loved you
When I loved you there wasn't nothing that you could do wrong?
When I loved you I lost my eye sight because I couldn't see pass your big brown eyes.
When I loved you I lost me trying to find you.
When I loved you my heart couldn't beat without you near.
When I loved you I forget who I was.
When I loved you my soul was sad but my body was happy.
When I loved you I pretended like the late nights wasn't so lonely.
When I loved you I allowed you to treat me unkind.
When I loved you I didn't have no room left to love me.
When I loved you I thought I was you were my dream came true but I was only living a nightmare.
When I loved you I couldn't love for another.
When I loved you I never heard the lies that you were always telling.
When I loved you there was no me without you.
When I loved you I thought you brought out the best of me but you only brought out the bad within me.
When I loved you I always put you in front of myself.
When I loved you I thought I needed you more then my own soul.
When I loved you that's all I knew but now I love me there will no longer be a you and me.
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