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When I loved you


When I loved you there wasn't nothing that you could do wrong? When I loved you I lost my eye sight because I couldn't see pass your big brown eyes. When I loved you I lost me trying to find you. When I loved you my heart couldn't beat without you near. When I loved you I forget who I was. When I loved you my soul was sad but my body was happy. When I loved you I pretended like the late nights wasn't so lonely. When I loved you I allowed you to treat me unkind. When I loved you I didn't have no room left to love me. When I loved you I thought I was you were my dream came true but I was only living a nightmare. When I loved you I couldn't love for another. When I loved you I never heard the lies that you were always telling. When I loved you there was no me without you. When I loved you I thought you brought out the best of me but you only brought out the bad within me. When I loved you I always put you in front of myself. When I loved you I thought I needed you more then my own soul. When I loved you that's all I knew but now I love me there will no longer be a you and me.
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