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When I Thought It Was The End


I could hear the devil singing his victory song. The waves of fear and doubt are crashing over me. I don't have the strength to fight anymore, and saying, "This giant has won." When I thought it was the end, it was then, when your light broke through my darkness, and the enemy began to flee at the mention of your very name. Doubt and fear, and this giant that was standing in front of me began to shudder!! You broke these chains - for I am forever no longer bound - but walking in your freedom!! Now I'm saying - "God, look at what you've done!" I will forever sing it out, for this is my declaration all for you, Jesus, and you alone!! I will sing it, I will shout it, because I can feel it, I can see the power of Christ working in me!! When I thought it was the end, you broke into my shadows and drew me out of the darkness. All because you are good, you are faithful and true, you are the one that I will always and forever be living for! Can you feel it? Can you hear it? Can you see the power of Christ working? The devil has lost his hold on me! When I thought it was the end - You walked through the fire and took this orphan's hand!! Amen!
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Yvonne Boehne

Just tryna' write poetry that always glorifies God and who He is, what he has done for me, and what He can and will do for you! If God can transform my life, I know without a doubt he can transform yours too! You are NEVER too far gone, or broken for God! Come to Jesus just as you are and give your life to him and watch the change happen when you turn to Jesus and live for Him!! Being a Christian is never easy, just as life isn't easy, but our only hope is in Jesus Christ the one and only!!

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal spiritual testimony with abstract religious concepts

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple dense ideas: fear, doubt, redemption, freedom, declaration, power

DarkSentimentBright

Strongly positive: victory, light, freedom, power, faithfulness celebrated

StillEnergyExplosive

Explosive intensity: exclamation marks, repetition, urgent declarations throughout

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 31-60 lines when parsed by natural breaks

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Consistent metaphors: waves, chains, light/darkness, fire imagery

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric first-person internal voice addressing God directly

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