When I was there

October 26, 2019

When I was there,

I was peaceful and free,

The waves were perfectly blue,

The sun was hot and high,

When I was there,

There were fields of sunflowers

Hugging me as I enter

When I was there

The roads were empty, and the sky was dark

The moon shined and very clear to see

When I was there

My heart pumped and blood rushing through my veins

When I was there

Butterflies came roamed around me

When I was there

My mind was in one piece and together.

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Comments (2)

miileva3Oct 27, 2019

<p>I know. It's a good reminder of what the bright light has stored for us. We will be there someday. I'm not there. </p>

LogosyncOct 27, 2019

<p>This is pretty awesome.  Reminds me of what it was like to be happy, and that if I try hard I might go there again someday.</p>