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WHEN I'M NOT LOVING


They say that I am incapable Of being a reasonable if to love is a délit I deserve the best death penalty And I'm crazy about everything When I'm not loving I'm like a model without cameras Like a girl without mirrors and makeup When I'm not loving like a doctor without knowledge Like my grandma without laugh Like humans without mixes Like a universe without love Like my body without my crazy hair They say that my art is bullshit That I don't write the soul perfectly That I don't belong to any world Because my religion is to be with someone of my same gender They say that my passion blinds me When I'm not dreaming My mind repeats do something Inside me seeds of love I have In my soul I got to do some searching To find a better feeling But I don't find anything fair than this If it's a delit to love Stop me immediately Then I will begin again And will to start again again again And im not just me when im not loving. -Jonatan Vega
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Jonatanvega

Hello my name is Jonatan Vega as you all see I love poetry.My favorite languages are Spanish,French,English and some Italian,but my first language is Spanish.I live in US but I am from México.I am a college student at American River college in Sacramento,CA.I consider myself as very talented.I am very confident.I am kinda quiet,but when you get to know me I am amazing.I consider defining what the soul feels is art:poetry.I am a painful poet most of the time,but I could write about everything when I put that objective in my mind.I love love for what it is.i am a amazing person if you get to talk to me Some of My work focuses on what I see as the repression of women by men. This often takes the form of personal insults directed at men in general Love,Heartbreak.life changed my writing by helping me to lose my former models, and reach a more dramatic lyricism, my style now showed more realism than before.Recurring themes in my work include love,hearbreak,humanism, nature, alienation,loss, love, pain, growth, hope,death, family, sorrow, women’s issues, and violence.Although my portrayal of men is ironic and critical,I felt a strong need for love, and Im able to express the tension and passion these ambivalent feelings in poetry both simple and deeply sensual, expressing an original note in erotic poetry in a sensitive manner. . Facebook: @Jonatan Vegâ poeta instagram: @Jonatanvega_writesbooks Twitter:@Fearlessvega Any thing you want to know feel free to ask

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