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When It Hurts Remake


When it hurts will we still see why we got together promise not to ever be temporary

Because I can’t take it anymore

I need you in my life

You make me laugh when I don’t want to

You hold me when I don’t your love

You’re there when I never called

Not another ordinary couple we have to change people’s definition of love

Because this is real for me

You treat me like a Queen when I don’t have the strength to do it myself

You pick me up when I’m down and make sure you say the right words

So I know this is real

You know it’s real

Please forgive what you heard know the only way that this will work, you gotta love me when I’m hurt

Can you love me when it hurts?

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