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When My Soul


When my soul Will form more now part of the universe Of the blue color until the black Because my soul like black It is combination of all colors When is my soul outside I'll miss my body Because taught me much To can touch to do something To feel what my soul wish When is my soul outside I will miss the days of my head lying on my pillow Coursing what life gave me With many fights that I gave The occasions lost were the most win Because I learned When is my soul outside I will miss my body Because not in any other place It would have had chosen to come to live in this world As when I chose once in heaven Of many souls that were looking to come to live Looking for a body to live I love so much to exist God The stars Are my poetry more big of my being I have seen so much hate in peoples eyes So much envy so much rancor as much unconsciousness Regardless of which color are their eyes For my soul is not worth if there is nothing If theres not a little exist in them In their words When is my soul outside Will be more inside than outside Maybe will bring me to God One soul with a being more soon That of what my light awaits I don't need my soul to be outside For knowing what my light shines Is just a way to wait so can happen To see that will happen When is my soul outside I'll fetch more with my mantle fair and good of the soul Although is the color of around Of any color Because I am a soul that has love Because I didn't thought in nothing that first will love me First to love myself Because I decided to come to live. -Jonatan Vega
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Jonatanvega

Hello my name is Jonatan Vega as you all see I love poetry.My favorite languages are Spanish,French,English and some Italian,but my first language is Spanish.I live in US but I am from México.I am a college student at American River college in Sacramento,CA.I consider myself as very talented.I am very confident.I am kinda quiet,but when you get to know me I am amazing.I consider defining what the soul feels is art:poetry.I am a painful poet most of the time,but I could write about everything when I put that objective in my mind.I love love for what it is.i am a amazing person if you get to talk to me Some of My work focuses on what I see as the repression of women by men. This often takes the form of personal insults directed at men in general Love,Heartbreak.life changed my writing by helping me to lose my former models, and reach a more dramatic lyricism, my style now showed more realism than before.Recurring themes in my work include love,hearbreak,humanism, nature, alienation,loss, love, pain, growth, hope,death, family, sorrow, women’s issues, and violence.Although my portrayal of men is ironic and critical,I felt a strong need for love, and Im able to express the tension and passion these ambivalent feelings in poetry both simple and deeply sensual, expressing an original note in erotic poetry in a sensitive manner. . Facebook: @Jonatan Vegâ poeta instagram: @Jonatanvega_writesbooks Twitter:@Fearlessvega Any thing you want to know feel free to ask

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