When the Sky Falls
When the sky fallen angels weeps their eyes
as the chillness in life begins to rise;
And your lonely shadow makes you cry
Their'll be one person who'll take your side, and hold your hand up high
They'll leave you! In your good times; but
would ever standby until the hell perish
They will unite and hold you tight ,
No matter what you say; unless the night fades away
They'll make you rise!
again to your sky......
Need no wings as your true friends would suffice
👁 18💬 0
Something wrong with this poem?
Replies are closed for this poem.
▾ This Poem's Voice
Your Poem's Voice
PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal reflection on friendship with abstract philosophical undertones
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple ideas presented: loneliness, betrayal, loyalty, redemption across medium density
DarkSentimentBright
Begins dark but resolves toward hopeful affirmation of friendship
StillEnergyExplosive
Moderate intensity with emotional peaks, punctuated by exclamations and pauses
MicroLengthEpic
Eleven lines falls in 7-15 range, compact yet substantial
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Rich metaphors: fallen angels, shadows, wings; personification of night
LyricVoiceDramatic
Primarily lyric internal voice with direct address to listener
Comments (0)
No comments yet. Be the first to share your thoughts.
Log in to leave a comment.