When you are most hurt...

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When you are most hurt,
You feel the most vulnerable.
You feel as if you are the victim in the picture.
When you are most hurt,
You feel the world has become too small for your feet to stand.
You feel as if there isn’t any air left for you to breathe in.
When you are most hurt,
You feel the most pain.
You feel as if there is a knife stabbing your wounded heart.
When you are most hurt,
You feel the world on your shoulders.
You feel as if there is no one in this world feels the same as you.

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