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When You breathe, I move


God your creation is so beautiful and perfect You are like the wind and I am a blade of grass among millions When You breathe, I move I am fragile and can easily be broken, but You… Nothing can stop your power When I sway back and forth, You are guiding me to where I need to be The world has the ability to hurt me, but you ultimately decide where I will land Not only do You move me but all those around me Even the blades of grass that may be temporarily hidden from Your wind are still being moved The seasons of the year are the seasons of my life Dry periods when I feel like I can’t go on (winter) And times when I feel so alive in You (summer) But during each season, You are there, still breathing And I, still being moved
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Comments (4)

ewhitney
Thank you! God helped me think of the words to use to write it! And yes, I agree!
KaitlinMarie
This is really nice! Reminds me of Isaiah 40:7-8 and Psalm 103. We're completely impermanent, temporal human beings...we live in time. God dwells in eternity.
ewhitney
Constantly being moved by Him
ewhitney
Constantly being moved by Him

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