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Where Did I Go Wrong


Where Did I go wrong 
What happen to Love 
What happen to Life 

My heart will never be the same 
You held me down in the rain
You made me feel so much pain

My peace of mind are lost in dreams 
My heart always screams 
Please don't touch me 
Don't you see what You are doing to me

You shattered my heart
You left me to die all alone on a cold 
Saturday night 
with no one around to see me down

Darkness consumed me 
You're marks all over me 
My eyesight started going fuzzy 

You're words eating away at my mind 
My body started to go numb 
My heart was feeling a heat of rage 

You destroyed me 
You had take all that was good about me
The light of life don't shine no more 
You had taken away my freedom.

Poetic  Judy J.  Emery(c) 

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Dark Angel Lilly Emery

To all my readers you may see that their are grammar errors in my old writings, but these writing are from the80's, 90's ,2000's. I truly didn't think anyone was readying my work . so I just started writing out what I felt and made my pains a story and poems . I had re post these poems and stories all over the internet and I keep them also in file so no one can ever say my work is theirs . I have kept my work as they are just for others to see where it was I started my writing at . The pains are so real not even a game ,The life I had lived I would never wish upon no one . I like to say to all who are taking the steps for change in their life congratulations to the new open doors God bless you . You may have seen my photos on the internet and my writings on Poetry.com and poem hunter etc. you may have seen the hate that others have given to me about my work and my beauty of who I am . But as you can see I will never let the haters Stop me from doing what I love . So I say the same to all of you write your own words and let your heart speak to all your readers . I hope you can understand why I haven't made changes in my work at less not the old ones . My old work are left as they are for me to always remember where it all came from . God bless to all who reads . Lilly Emery / Judy Emery

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