Where did the time go
Okay fair warning, this poem sucks. But I'm egar to hear how i should improve. here it goes!
Now is the youth of discovery
Now is the ag eof knowlege
2 fools together make a man worth time
time is gone, time will fly
Around the clock your life runs
around the wallet your life revolves
up and down through life situations
How hard? That's a mindset
How hard? That's thinking
10 to 20 to 42
50,80, times up for you
Everybody knows, everyone goes
Where was i when they needed me most
everyone cries in order to fly
fly to a place in the endless sky
Life, Liberty, and the pursuit of happiness
no longer matteres until my children live in it
Live in a world that I created
That I destroyed, that I ignited
a world they will suffer
maybe worsen maybe fight in
I still have time, an active mind
let it soar, let my spirit chime
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