While I - others (in an age of distraction) ~a5.7.5.haiku chain
While I - concentrate
reality's grip lessens
others - gain traction
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While I - sit idly
concentration flys away
others - take action.
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While I - lay at rest
nothing much really matters
others - have factions
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While I - meditate
a spotlight begins to shine
others - reactions
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While I - now look back
their shadows have been right there
others - right with them...
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...in an age of distraction.
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Having become late deafened, I now use poetry as a form of bridging the comm. barrier.
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