The White Aspen
Dear Ortho,
In some foreign culture,
That you and I both wouldn't know,
They say when you love her,
You hang up a bouquet of lillies
In the tallest white Aspen
That you could ever find.
But, isn't that just dumb?
If it was raining, you would slip down the trunk
Landing on an ankle in exactly the wrong way.
If you were climbing, you would scrape your hands,
Ruining their gentle touch forever.
If you were hanging, you would get scared,
Because you wouldn't be able to come to see me off.
If you were thinking, you wouldn't be thinking about her.
But whether you had told me where you were.
If you were starting to climb, you would start to cry
Because I was leaving and we weren't prepared.
If you were finally up there, it would be for the wrong reason.
Because you're hanging lillies for the wrong person.
And when you came down from the white Aspen.
At the base where the leaves pile high in the fall
With cuts and scraped, drenched in sweat,
You would forget those ten minutes
When you were being an idiot,
And needlessly risking your life.
You would see that I would be waiting
With my very own white bouquet.
Sincerely,
Winter C.
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