Who are you?

Fri, 04/19/2013 - 02:32 -- Debby_

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United States
39° 36' 10.3176" N, 119° 46' 38.4456" W

Who are you? Why do you follow me?
I dont understand why you wont let me feel free.
Your voice echos in my head and I cant shake you out.
All you do is insult and shout.
But who are you? Your not who you should be.
A foul figure, I shouldnt be my own enemy.
Your not welcomed here but I cant get you to leave.
Your rude and I'm confused. I miss the feeling of relife.
Who are you? Please go away.
You make my eyes see differently.
I know were a lot alike but your not nice to me.
I question where your from and why I cant get you to leave.
Its like I crave your attention but I expect a sweet affection.
Just one more time I ask again.
Who are you? Why do you follow me?

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

whatever or whoever it is that is hurting you
let it go because if you continue, it will continue to eat away your soul
live your life through all glory and happiness-build off this poem

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