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why

by poetic_justice_is_just_so_poetic

I thought I was over him I was over him I am over him But would it be bad if I wasn't? Who am I tryna kid, he never liked me But he's smart and funny He likes my music He's in band and highschool chorus He's kinda perfect for me But he isn't interested He never will like me And I don't like him anymore So why can't I make up my mind?
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enjambmentrepetitionidentitylovehumorfree verse

poetic_justice_is_just_so_poetic

A young girl chasing a dream that can't be caught, Holding onto hope that is too far gone Losing her mind trying to help others get theirs back Prayers go unanswered no matter what she does It's the life of no one, no one but me

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal romantic uncertainty, autobiographical internal conflict

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple ideas densely layered: denial, attraction, incompatibility, confusion

DarkSentimentBright

Melancholic confusion mixed with self-aware humor; neither hopeful nor despairing

StillEnergyExplosive

Restless questioning creates tension; mostly introspective with bursts of frustration

MicroLengthEpic

14 lines; falls within 7-15 line range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Declarative, direct language; minimal metaphor or ornament

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; unmediated first-person emotional reflection

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