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Why Can't I?


Deep in the shadows I hear a call Not one voice but three I see three pairs of eyes An angel's, a demon's and mine. I hear all three shouting at me The angel telling me to go with her The demon pulling me towards him And myself teling me to fight for what I want Then I wake up and notice a scratch on my arm and tears running down my face I can only ask myself, "What did I do?" Awake restless, what did I do? Now I feel trapped in the dark like nothing can save me I shout for help and notice that no one can hea them. I need to find myself but, I can't. Next night I see the same three pair of eyes I become scared Then I notice they are all quiet and each have a hand out. I can feel myself walking towards the demon and see the angel and myself with a sad disappointed look I sceam and try to get away and run towards the angel. Next thing I see is myself right by me telling me "You have too much darkness within you don't try to run this is you." Now it turns into a demon with malice on it's face I scream again They finally catch me I start to relax I left myself be drawn in and never coming back.
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savigirl14
<p>Wow this poem is really haunting. I love the description of all three choices. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.</p>

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