why do i miss him ?

by f_lanceyx

December 15, 2024

Why do I miss him ? he gave me my favourite colour wich is red

he gave me my favourite sport wich is football

I miss his beautiful smile he would make everytime I would pass by

I miss his beautiful grey eyes he would stare me with

I miss his long hugs wich made me feel comforted

I miss how he would comfort me when my anxiet was high

I don't know why I miss him because he treats me like dirt on the bottom of his shoe

wich is true but why do I miss him

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Adventure_catDec 16, 2024

The question of your note is in his presenceThe answer to your question, is a rather haunting quote"Fake love is like a mirage in the desert,it promises relief and comfort, but in the end,it leaves you more parched and lost than before."Why do you miss him?It's illusion that he gaveWhy do you miss him?It's the fake love that he gaveIt's unfortunate that that's what makes you crave, the presence that he gaveOr rather, the illusion that he gave(Note: sorry if this is too personal of a thing I created, I never meant to intrude, rather comfort & reply)