Why me ?????

December 3, 2015

I'm a kitten who just wants to play

But when it comes to playtime where I live it never ends nicely

I'm kicked, thrown, and slapped.

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Comments (2)

ticksoupDec 16, 2015

<p>The "slapped" part made me chuckle a bit. I wouldn't consider this a negative, nor positive comment.</p>

MckaylaDavisDec 3, 2015

<p>i've never done this please give feedback positive and negative.</p>