Will They Notice Me
I am slowly falling apart;
No one can put the pieces back together.
Everyone can see right through me:
I wonder if they notice me.
I feel like a bag in the wind;
I don’t know where it ends or begins.
I want to go where it all started,
To prevent me from feeling this pain.
There’s cuts on my veins;
People still fail to notice me.
I wonder if I stayed:
Would everything remain the same.
I decided to stay;
People came my way.
I think i’ll be okay:
People started to notice me.
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