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Will They Notice Me


I am slowly falling apart;

No one can put the pieces back together.

Everyone can see right through me:

I wonder if they notice me.

 

I feel like a bag in the wind;

I don’t know where it ends or begins.

I want to go where it all started,

To prevent me from feeling this pain.

 

There’s cuts on my veins;

People still fail to notice me.

I wonder if I stayed:

Would everything remain the same.

 

I decided to stay;

People came my way.

I think i’ll be okay:

People started to notice me.

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es03124
<p>This poem is about the world and how we sha&#39;ll not take our own lives and that things do get better.</p>

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