Will You Ever Trust Me?
In the little time we have shared
you have yet to cross me,
but if I say "yes"
my tears are at risk.
That may not seem fair to you
but it doesn't have to be
because I am fragile
in more ways than you will see.
This is more precious than my love,
so when I say "I do"
you will have more than just my heart...
You will finally have my trust.
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serenajimenez10
Like everyone else, I've gone through my hardships and I know there are more to come. I've lost friends whom were close to me, I've suffered with grades in school, and I have my own family issues. I used to write with a pessimistic perspective, as you'll see in my earlier writings, but people change with time. I don't want to view what has happened and what will happen through a dark haze. I now write with a more hopeful attitude despite if I'm sad or angry. By reading these, you're getting to know the inner me and though I encourage constructive criticism, for that reason, please be honest and kind. Thank you and, by the way, it's nice to meet you! ;)
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