Winter Day Acrostic

<p>Some of the imagery is good. Using cold twice took me out of it a little bit. There are</p><p>so many other words that changing it could even help strengthen the imagery. I think</p><p>star should be stars but I&#39;m sure you just forgot the letter. It is a really strong poem&nbsp;</p><p>and the descriptions definitely make things feel wintery. I really liked the description</p><p>of nighttime. The E line didn&#39;t sound totally right when I read it out loud. I think it</p><p>might be the tense. The rest of it is very strong.</p>

<p>1.The tone of this poem I would say is uplifting/ calm.</p><p>2.This poem is speking to the people who also is expereincing the winter coldness.</p><p>3.This poem makes me feel comfort because It reminds me of the times where I would bundle up from the cold and be warm.</p><p>4.I found &quot;Icicles hang frrom the rooftops and sparkle like stars&quot; stricking because I could really picture that image in mt head.</p><p>5.No,I don&#39;t think theres any akward places in this poem.</p><p>6.Yes,I feel the descriptiveness of the poem helps deliver the poems message good.</p><p>7.The layout of the poem relates to what type of poem it is.</p><p>8. no, I think the lines and pauses are at good places.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>&nbsp;</p>

<p>I really love winter as a subject for writing so this poem really speaks to me, you bolded every first letter except for &quot;I&quot; and &quot;E&quot; though you did it in a pattern so this could be intentional. On the second line, &quot;sparkle like star&quot; is slightly awkward as usually the word star would either be plural or have an &quot;a&quot; in front of it, and I think it&#39;s muddying the image slightly. Speaking of, I think a stronger image could replace, &quot;the weather is so very cold&quot; while still retaining your message, I think it could really strenghten the poem over all.&nbsp;</p><p>I really liked it, glad to have read it.&nbsp;</p>