A Wish Come True
It’s Christmas Eve 2016
I put out the milk and cookies
When I wake up, I roll up my sleeves
to eat what Mom’s been cooking
I looked at the gifts, filled with cheer because Santa Claus had been here
That was my wish
My wish was for Santa to pay me a visit and eat from his cookie dish
It’s Christmas Eve 2021
Stockings and garland nicely hung
Santa had turned into Mom and Dad, and wishes into wants
Milk and cookies out like normal
Pjs on, not very formal
It’s 9:00pm, and the lights are out
Mom says not to go out and scout
I sit there with the fan running, and shadows on the ceiling
Pondering about what I’ve been feeling
My 2021 wish has come to mind; it was to feel happy and alive
Now it’s Christmas morning 2024
I heard a knock at the door
It wasn’t the Polar Express train
But the smell of casserole that filled my brain
The table was filled with good food
Mom says to wait and not be rude
It was time to open my first gift
I give it a shake and a lift
I take a minute to look around, realizing I am no longer feeling drowned
My 2021 wish has come true, all thanks to Jesus, I love you
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Deeply personal, autobiographical journey across three Christmases
Moderate density; multiple ideas per section, meditative pacing
Predominantly positive; growth, gratitude, spiritual resolution
Quiet, reflective voice; minimal explosiveness or kinetic intensity
Approximately 25-28 lines; falls in 16-30 range
Some metaphor and personification; mostly declarative narrative
Pure lyric internal voice; introspective reflection, minimal dramatic shift
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