Wishing on a Shooting Star
One night,
the sky was filled with
thousands of stars
as I wandered around the valley.
A cold wind blew through me,
chilling my body and mind.
I sat on the tiny grass,
which was dazzling with dew.
The sky was full of stars,
but I was waiting for one thing,
For a shooting star.
After a few minutes,
the moment I was waiting for arrived.
A bright shooting star roamed around the sky
just above my head.
I closed my eyes
and wished for what I wanted.
The shooting star disappeared with my wishes,
and now I am waiting for them to come true.
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