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Wishing upon a star


High above the clouds

far beyond our reach

i see the shing stars

with different in each.

I wished upon the biggest

that someday soon i'd find

a love thats good and strong

that tells me it takes time.

I go then to the next

and wished upon it to

i only ask for money 

but this will not come soon.

I find but one star left

after wishing on them all

will i ever find secces

in the smallest of them all.

I decided it's worth a try

but before i said a word

the star began to speak

and this is what i heard.

" you've wasted all your time wishing upon the stars. You ask for all the biggest, but look how far you are.If you stop for just one second i'm sure that you will

how far you are. If you stop for just one second,i'm sure that you will see

, wishing will do no goood, if it's not meant to be."

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Dalton Pierce

I'm 18 years old i'm 5'10 have brown eyes. I have a black belt in Tang Soo Do karate, i have a gentle soul. I have type 1 diabetes and on an insulin pump.

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