within you

Those golden pools 

searching, learning, wanting

I looked into your eyes

And surprisingly I found it

 

That urge to do more, to push myself

To accomplish my goals

All I wanted was to make you proud

I found it in you, but it was only for me

 

I soon became hungry, Hungry for success

You no longer crossed my mind, but you inspired me

You are the inspiration everyone needs

Thank you golden boy

 

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