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Without You



My life depends on you,

Like  rose depends on the sun.

My life without you can't go on,

Like a ship out in the blue.

 

I depend on you more than anyone,

Like a toddler holding her mother's hand.

I depend on you to be in this land,

Like an atention seeker without someone.

 

My life without you is incomplete,

Like a puzzle missing a piece.

My life depends on you like a disease,

Like a child without a treat.

 

My adiction to you a revelation

My air, my salvation 

 

 
 
 
 
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