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Without Your Sun


      

     Sweetie im confused and its because of you  .


   You took my heart and i never loose. You are a thief beyond crime .


Someday when your words unwind , i hope this world treats you like a dime .


  You called me your sunshine, those words renewed my spine . 


    My head was down far beneath the ground, but you brought it up .., 


     you brought it up with the clouds . 


   There's no way no way way how , someone can be treated like this,


     but i guess with you , with you i missed .


    My soul was captured. You were the one. 


     and you messed up , so now we're done.
 

  I hope one day you see the fool in you and what you've lost.


               ...........Your sun.






 

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