WOMAN AND ME

by kpilatax

October 24, 2014

I don't if is been the movies or my friends,

I have recently become an addict for a woman's fur,

their beautiful skin and beautiful lips make me go crazy,

if only I had a special girl that could fulfill my thirst,

but I have been looking for her over three years,

I still can't find her,

not in school nor at work,

I know that if I keep searching for her, one day I will find thy love.

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Comments (2)

Angelwith1wingOct 24, 2014

<p>Wow! Great poem:)!!! I like how even though you haven't found the love of life, you still have hope to keep searching for her. With great determination and faith, you are bound to find her someday. Keep your head up and pray about it my friend. Keep writing on my friend:)!!!</p>

kpilataxOct 24, 2014

<p>Please tell me your thoughts if you think I'm a good writer, about this poem.</p>