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Womanhood (as it shouldn't be)


like clockwork 

it struck when i was sixteen 

i thought i would be safe

 

no one should have what i have

down there 

 

find the common denominator

 

one second plus two seconds

a minute is too long

and inconsistent 

 

a watch wound too tight

tick tock    tick tock     tick 

talk- 

inescapable babble

 

a clock will stop when 

it hits the floor

 

time is fleeting 

time is fleeing

you can't reclaim sixteen 

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Hi! My name is Elizabeth Davenport, and I'm a college student who loves all things language, no matter what language it is! I'm probably reading, writing, or dancing in the rain right now. I'm a featured poet, Aura, on diesandnoctis.com (go check them out: they're great!), and use the names E.D., Elie Dav, and Elizabeth Davenport when posting my own.

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S.zaynab.k
<p>We came reclaim sweet 16 eh. A fantastic poem, great rhythm and poetic words. I like it lots. Kudos.</p><p>I see comments are not common here, but interaction is good for the human touch in this cold world. &nbsp;Pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too.</p>

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