Won't U cum wid Me pleeez
I cum from deep pain, I'm bleeding out....
In a passion I can no longer contain.
Cum near Me Babe....
I promise it'll hurt I promise it'll passion
I promise it'll Me
A matrimony of all My prodigious desires
All for....
To have
In counterpart with this intense rage within. Therefore, all Yours for the taking.
To hold
To You
Paid in full, in sacrificial rituals unto You.
Or leaving, all Yours for the choosing.
In this continual separating of what is not Mine to
keep.
Expelled in the expression of
All I Am.
Raises arousal in the becoming of
All I Am.
How will You partake, in the feast fully Me?
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Your Poem's Voice
PersonalThemeAbstract
Deeply personal desire and pain, some abstract philosophical claims about self.
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple overlapping ideas: pain, passion, sacrifice, desire, identity compressed densely.
DarkSentimentBright
Dark intensity mixing pain, rage, sacrifice with erotic desire; conflicted emotional register.
StillEnergyExplosive
Explosive, visceral language: bleeding, passion, rage, arousal; breathless intensity throughout.
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 22 lines; falls in 16-30 range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Metaphor (matrimony, feast, sacrifice), personification (desires as entities), extended sensual/spiritual imagery.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice addressing 'You'; intimate first-person confessional throughout.
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