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In the Woods, a Cabin-


Nightfall, and with it an ominous chill, then fear, overpowering... You hear the hoot of an owl, smell woodsmoke, see a cabin- there, in the clearing- and you think, humans? then wonder- friend or foe? And there comes a sound as if of chanting, pleasant, melodious almost like prayer it is in a language foreign, indecipherable and the voice pulls you closer spellbound- ( though a part of you wants to slip away, back, into the night...) But the unknown is revealed by one word, "Welcome" it comes thickly accented spoken by a woman gnarled as a hag, though seemingly benevolent. And behind her stands a child, - an angelic, black-eyed boy he carries a tray of pastries, and tiny porcelain cups brimming with tea.
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Annette M Velasquez

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Annette M Velasquez
Thank you- This was just a purely imaginative free- write.
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<p>very creative and witty</p><p>great job with the words you use to express about the world</p><p>it&#39;s unique how you took one aspect of a setting and bring it to life</p><p>well written</p>

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