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Worker Bees


“Shoot for a star, Even if you don’t make it, you’ll land on the moon.” The teacher said, like the sky isn’t far. “Believe, believe, and you will achieve.” The parents say, like you won’t grieve. “Progress is progress, no matter how small.” But don’t make any progress, And you will fall. They cheer you on, make you feel great Until you realize They're holding a mask over their face The don’t want bees That fly away from the hive They want bees Who only stay inside They make these words of ‘wisdom’ But it’s a problem “You can do this.” Bosses say, which means you can fail. "You were born for this." Coaches say, like there is nothing else for you. Because all they want Is worker bees
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Willow Poetry

Hello! I'm Willow Poetry. I write poetry as an outlet, to express my emotions, and for fun! I hope you enjoy my poetry, and feel free to write a comment.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal disillusionment with societal pressure, elevated to philosophical critique of conformity.

SparseMeasureDense

Dense layering of motivational clichés, repeated observations, multiple idea clusters.

DarkSentimentBright

Heavily negative; critiques false hope, masks, systemic control, resignation to failure.

StillEnergyExplosive

Sharp, accusatory tone with building intensity; enjambment and declarative statements propel.

MicroLengthEpic

28 lines; falls in 16-30 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Extended bee/hive metaphor, mask imagery, stars/moon conceit; rich symbolic layer.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric internal voice but shifts to dramatic critique of external voices.

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MaverineSage
Your poems today make me think of ones I have written, but APPARENTLY, I've reached my daily poem limit!😭

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