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Shoulders tired
Legs getting weak
The last man standing of three
Called to duty young
Carrying hopes and dreams
None of your own
But made your own
Only to cast a towering shadow
Standing inside and outside
as others look from a distance
the separating stare
That makes a bright model of you
And a dark trouble of yourself
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