The world goes spinning round and round

October 8, 2012

The world goes spinning round and round Sometimes I don`t even know why we can even touch the ground Look to the left, look to your right People are different from site to site We all come together In this planet called Earth Being reunited in a world of service We need to help others that are in need But don`t forget the ones who fought for their country See the ones who suffer due to their beliefs and their health Reach out and give them a helping hand It is ok to follow your dreams But Never forget who you are As the world goes spinning round and round

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[email protected]Nov 7, 2012

Thank you again so much I really appreciate it!

jwienerNov 6, 2012

This poem is a great example of how we can use poetry to cause change for the better in the world! Learning to care for and respect the people who fight for our country and also following our own dreams is extremely important! Amazing work! Keep writing, and check out "poetry writing tips" for things you want to accomplish in the "resources" section of the site!