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Worth More Than Gold


I get told that sometimes I'm a brat.

I get told I overreact.

I get told I lack a certain tact.

My talents are never quite exact

from what perfect others always protract.

From life's evenness, I get told I distract. 

My paintings are really rather abstract.

And my opinions sometimes

get mixed up with fact.

I find it's hard to keep my side

of the contract.

I often find myself getting sidetracked.

And when life gives a whack,

I fall down hard from the impact.

I get told I'm not all that special,

I'm worthless, broken, cracked.

But,  even as I slacked,

My father loves His special, wonderful,

rare artifact.

His law is enact.

His love for me will never detract.

He sees me for who I am,

He sees the tears I'm holding packed.

And He knows I can make it back.

I get told I'm not very bold.

But, He says

that I'm worth more than gold.

 

 

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TamingOfSeaWolves
<p>worth more than gold you are, who decides what beuty is? to me its</p><p>a warrior who still loves .</p><p>someone who is trying.</p><p>&nbsp;someone who hurts but still moves on.</p><p>someone with scars,inside or out</p><p>someone who smiles despite having just finnished a double shift on their second job</p><p>that someone could be anyone</p><p>including you</p><p>those people are worth much more than gold</p><p>&nbsp;</p>

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