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Would You be Proud?


Would you be proud? If you had never closed your eyes for the last time and woke up to me now? Would you be proud? knowing I've made mistakes. Maybe ones that make me ashamed. But despite all that, Would you still be proud? Proud of me walking down the aisle in my cap and gown? Would you say, who did you turned out to be? Instead say I'm proud to be, your father? I'm holding tightly to my weakness of myself. But would you say let it loose because you know no matter what happens I'll pick myself up and say for that I'm proud of the woman you've become.
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My name is Destiny and I love to write poetry. I love going to church, reading, and much more. If you browse my poetry please critique it. I love getting opinions on it. I want to expand my knowledge. My inspiration comes from every where.

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