'Writing The Storm'

January 10, 2022

“Replay the riff in G,”

Robby said to Ray

“Come in a half beat behind,”

they both said to John

Then the three looked at Jim who said…

“Lay it all down,

turn it all over,

and pull it all back”

(8901 West Sunset Boulevard: West Hollywood California, 7-21-1966)

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