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You


It was as if god had shined a light on you to make you stand out in a crowd. 

How funny I thought because you didn’t even need it to stand out. 

Those perfect features that made you look like an angel sent from heaven. You had so many traits that made me notice you

Like those eyes that say temptress or that devilish smile that ironically screams kindness and love

So many amazing traits

So many things that drew me to you 

Like that personality that lured me in like a kid to candy or a shark to blood

After just a drop I came closer to you hoping to get more of what I was craving…

You

Wanting to immerse myself into you

Wanting to learn more about you 

Things like…

...what are your likes and dislikes 

...your hobbies 

...or what makes you, you 

I try to unlock all the locked door that you have

To see all of your darkest secrets not to criticize but, to love the the same why I love you 

Not to make fun of them but, to understand the circuits that connect to form the amazing being that I’ve fallen so hard for everything about you

Just your very being has beseeched me 

But, you’re are more than just beauty when I fell for you I fell hard

 

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