you

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44° 14' 24.522" N, 103° 17' 52.0296" W

just when i think i’m at the point of breaking
just when i think that everything is going all wrong
stress is getting to the best of me
my mind is always racing
my day is never good
nothing seems to go right
all hope is lost

i am left in complete darkness
i am overwhelmed by life
i feel like i’m drowning
i’m in a crowded room
screaming at the top of my lungs
and no one even looks up

i step out into the night
that’s when it happens
everything goes away
then it comes back again
i find myself lost
but you’re all i think of

you’re all that i want
we try to be together
but there is something we both have to know
something that can only make this work
some people don’t agree
but here it is
here is my promise to you

it’s not going to be easy
it’s going to be really hard
we’re going to have to work at this everyday
but i want to do that
because i want you
i want all of you
forever
everyday
you and me

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