YOU ARE NOT INVISIBLE
[Verse One] :
You've got my attention;
There's no need to hurt yourself this way.
You think no one will listen
Or notice that you cry yourself to sleep.
You feel stuck on the outside looking in.
Wishing this life wasn't your life
You think you're damaged beyond repair
[Pre-Chorus] :
Well, you're not so far,
That I can't get to where you are.
You wish you were someone else
Every night as you fall to pieces.
[Chorus/Hook] :
Knowing You Can't Save Yourself
Well I Can See And I Can Hear You
There's A Place Where All The Broken Go
Where There's A Room Full Of Second Chances.
You Are Not Stranded On Your Own
You Are Not Invisible
You Are Not All Alone
No You Are Not Invisible
[Verse 2] :
I'm ready to listen
There's no need to hold it all inside
The smallest whisper, I hear it
Even as your strength has all but died
I need you to believe me.
Can you trust in me,
When I say, I don't see what you see
Cause the reflection in your mirror
Has been telling you lies
Cause there's nothing you have ever done
that could ever change my love
[Chorus/Hook] :
Knowing You Can't Save Yourself
Well I Can See And I Can Hear You
There's A Place Where All The Broken Go
Where There's A Room Full Of Second Chances.
You Are Not Stranded On Your Own
You Are Not Invisible
You Are Not All Alone
No You Are Not Invisible
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal crisis and suicidal ideation; grounded in specific emotional experience.
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple interconnected ideas: despair, invisibility, hope, reassurance. Moderate density across 50+ lines.
DarkSentimentBright
Predominantly hopeful and affirming despite dark subject matter; redemptive arc dominates.
StillEnergyExplosive
Urgent, direct address; emphatic capitalization and repetition; insistent reassurance throughout.
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 54 lines; solidly within 31-60 range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Metaphors (mirror lies, broken place, room of chances); personification (strength dying); some plainness.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Strong dramatic persona addressing 'you' directly; speaker assumes comforter role with specific voice.
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