you been served
two dudes at the subway platform
one of them was trying to holla
at a female
should've anticipate better than a movie trail
homeboy's skills were so off track, he derail
where is the doctor?
there was no doctor at the train station
he looked a skinny freeway on crack
whole persona was so wack
as he tried and tried
she wasn't feeling
didn't get the hint
should've offered him a mint
like his breath, it was kickin
whatever was she said
he finally got it
he walked away feeling more dumber than a crackhead taking 3 hits
i had to laugh
it was hysterical
now it's time to perform the stage and get lyrical
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