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YOU CAPTIVATED ME


You Captivated Me / Dark Angel

I always knew that love would come find me someday 
But never did I know that it would be so faraway, 
Light frames the day, the night with the beautiful 
Moon shine your love right to my heart, 
You caught me off guard and took me by surprise 
With the stars still in your eyes, 
You captivated me by the words had to say, 
The words of love I never dreamed would come my way 
But it had to start by your words of far, 
Your are my Paris heart, You are much older then me 
But one thing I have learned from you love does not have an age. 
It's true that every good and perfect gift is from above and to the 
Ones that weight for the right time, 
you were presented to me as a beautifully packaged gift full of humor, 
Talent, intelligence, beauty and love from our God we both love, 
'it isn't finding the perfect person but learning to see an imperfect person perfectly' 
We all have our flaws but when I view you through my eyes, 
Perfection is all I see an older man looking back at me. 
I think Jehovah God for sending you my way. 


Poetic Lilly J.  Emery (c) 

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Dark Angel Lilly Emery

To all my readers you may see that their are grammar errors in my old writings, but these writing are from the80's, 90's ,2000's. I truly didn't think anyone was readying my work . so I just started writing out what I felt and made my pains a story and poems . I had re post these poems and stories all over the internet and I keep them also in file so no one can ever say my work is theirs . I have kept my work as they are just for others to see where it was I started my writing at . The pains are so real not even a game ,The life I had lived I would never wish upon no one . I like to say to all who are taking the steps for change in their life congratulations to the new open doors God bless you . You may have seen my photos on the internet and my writings on Poetry.com and poem hunter etc. you may have seen the hate that others have given to me about my work and my beauty of who I am . But as you can see I will never let the haters Stop me from doing what I love . So I say the same to all of you write your own words and let your heart speak to all your readers . I hope you can understand why I haven't made changes in my work at less not the old ones . My old work are left as they are for me to always remember where it all came from . God bless to all who reads . Lilly Emery / Judy Emery

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