You Have Not Done What I've Asked
I ask you to listen to me
You hear my words but you only hear, not listen
You have not done what I've asked
I ask you to care for me
You care about me but only to an extent
You have not done what I've asked
I ask you to love me
You use your tongue as a whip with the lashing of your harsh words
You have not done what I asked
I asked you to judge me
You form opinions without knowing everything
You have now done what I asked
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