You Looked Rather Nice Today

You Looked Rather Nice Today
With your hair all messy
And the drops of rain on your coat.

You Looked Rather Nice Today
With your khaki pants
And tattered old grey shoes.

You Looked Rather Nice Today
When you said my name
Sweetly and softly and wonderfully.

You Looked Rather Nice Today
Did you know?
Your smile was the most beautiful.

You Looked Rather Nice Today
I wonder if you knew
That you lit up the room.

You Looked Rather Nice Today
I wonder if you'll ever know.

Comments

Wilkie Vanessa Bailey

I really like this one... the anaphora is great. Keep it up! :)

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