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You Looked Rather Nice Today


You Looked Rather Nice Today With your hair all messy And the drops of rain on your coat. You Looked Rather Nice Today With your khaki pants And tattered old grey shoes. You Looked Rather Nice Today When you said my name Sweetly and softly and wonderfully. You Looked Rather Nice Today Did you know? Your smile was the most beautiful. You Looked Rather Nice Today I wonder if you knew That you lit up the room. You Looked Rather Nice Today I wonder if you'll ever know.
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Wilkie Vanessa Bailey
I really like this one... the anaphora is great. Keep it up! :)

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