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You Make Her Happy


You make her happy,

But she still cried over you,

She doesn’t know how to make you guys better,

She says she's sorry all the time but it’s not enough,

You yell at her in front of everyone,

Her parents tell her that your no good for her,

She smiled at the thought of you though but she knows you don’t,

She just can’t help it,

You just make her happy.

 

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upnorthdavid
I like the use of repetition. Keep writing

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