You (Pt. 1 & 2)
Part 1
You show too much teeth when you smile
Your laugh is obnoxious
You eat too much
You don't know how to dress
You shouldn't style your hair that way
You spend too much time with friends and family
You need to listen to me
You are the crazy one
You should be grateful that I just want what is best for you
You know I tell you these things only because I love you
You love me too
You love me more than you love yourself
Your life is my life
You are nothing without me
You cannot leave me
You will not find anybody better than me
Part 2
You are strong
You're intelligent
You deserve the best
You should not listen to negative comments
You are perfect the way you are
You do not need to change to please anyone
You are free to do whatever you desire
You are free to be whoever you like
You need to remember that to be happy you need to be you
You hopefully realize that I tell you this beause I love you
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