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You (Pt. 1 & 2)


Part 1

You show too much teeth when you smile

Your laugh is obnoxious

You eat too much

You don't know how to dress

You shouldn't style your hair that way

You spend too much time with friends and family

You need to listen to me

You are the crazy one

You should be grateful that I just want what is best for you

You know I tell you these things only because I love you 

You love me too

You love me more than you love yourself

Your life is my life

You are nothing without me

You cannot leave me

You will not find anybody better than me

 

Part 2

You are strong

You're intelligent 

You deserve the best

You should not listen to negative comments

You are perfect the way you are

You do not need to change to please anyone

You are free to do whatever you desire

You are free to be whoever you like

You need to remember that to be happy you need to be you

You hopefully realize that I tell you this beause I love you

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