You told me I was
You told me I was beautiful,
coated me with your powder sugar.
You told be I was a barbie doll,
caressed me with your sticky caramel.
You told me I was a genius,
charmed me with your oozing sap.
You told be I was a somebody,
coddled me with your viscous candy.
You said I was yours!
You said I made you proud!
You said I was,
I was everything to you!
Where are You now?
I look around me,
and see melting pools of sweets,
You reflecting of its muddy hue.
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