Your Face
Your Face by Blossom Monyei
Is it a coincidence that I pray wholeheartedly and it comes to light.
Seeing your face is all I long
The time I was told bedtime stories, the time monsters stayed in the dark, not in my mind.
Now I'm an adult I believe them no more.
Because monsters I sought I couldn't find
My doubts have burned again
Ashes in the wind
All I asked you gave
But for one you didn't; to see your face.
Is it coincidence?
you don't speak
You aren't visible
I can't prove.
I Believe
I follow
But some how my heart asks
Is it coincidence?
Show me your face
What does it takes?
It's not just to feel
I want to know you're real.
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▾ This Poem's Voice
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal faith crisis exploring abstract questions of divine presence and proof.
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple interconnected ideas: prayer, doubt, belief, proof woven densely across stanzas.
DarkSentimentBright
Predominantly melancholic; yearning and doubt dominate with spiritual uncertainty throughout.
StillEnergyExplosive
Moderate intensity; questioning urgency builds but sustained contemplative tone restrains explosive force.
MicroLengthEpic
Twenty-five lines; falls within 16-30 line range indicating medium-length lyric poem.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Monsters metaphor, ashes imagery, personification of heart; moderate ornamentation with plain declarative sections.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; introspective meditation on personal spiritual doubt without narrative movement.
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