Your Life: Unlike Me

August 21, 2013

Unlike me

you live your life

as if it's a game

rolling the dice

taking the chances

whenever they come up

You live life

with a lot of unsolved problems

whenever they come up

I take a step back

your goals will never be reached

unlike me

With a lot of unsolved problems

you're bound to screw up

unlike me

I'm the top of the class

most likely to succeed while

you live life

You're bound to screw up

with the game you're playing

you live life

far away from mine

you're set for failure

with a lot of unsolved problems

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetMay 8, 2014

live your lifeand future is built on dreamslet those go that don't want to mount up to anything