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Your Mind Is Your Power


Your mind is a powerful thing and over time your mind could judge you,

but thy who judge himself could unlock wisdom and knowledge.

So if you spoke or made a quote, your inspirational words

could tell the world a thing or two about life.

So your mind shouldn't be something to fear,

it should be something you’re in line with.

So commutation is a fraction of what your brain is showing as it works,

as if our legs where moving in a direction that is vertical with the Earth's axis.

 

So you can take this as a figure of speech

or metaphor or personification,

because your brain is like a secret admirer.

It knows everything about you but you don't know anything about it.

It's like an endless quote that never stops giving motivation

that helps you throughout life. In the end it's the only thing that you can trust.

When you’re born you have a thought and

in your last you have another thought.

So if you put this together it's going to clash and make some stupid weather.

Your brain is a secret, so I wonder if you can keep it.

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Mafi Grey

I went through a lot of hard life situations, but it never stopped me from trying to make something of myself. Currently, I'm following my dream to become a chef and on the side is the passion I hold deep for poetry. I hope you enjoy my art and my poems. Oh, just one more thing, please comment as much as you can. It motivates me to write, when I have an audience behind me. Also, It really shows when a person responds to my quotes or poems can make you feel that special feeling saying you really can do what you can do. I mean it's like a painter who puts his new work in the gallery for display for all to see, and then turns around to see 10 to 20 people standing around trying to figure out his inspiration, his thoughts, and what lead him there? I love when a person understands me and when their trying to dissect my thoughts. Also, when my work of art can help others cope with their monsters and to help a person become inspired. Thanks a lot. I grew up without a father, but that never stop me from becoming a man; yet I thought life would be easy but it wasn't. The pain that I grew up with was hard, but the thought that grew with inside me was even harder. Could I be a good father, could I contain the pain; could I even forget or could I be something better than what he tried to be. Before I knew it, I woke up a man with pain in his knees, with hair on his face; even with sweat, tears, and blood on his sleeves. The lost of hair, the responsibility of having faith in you and where I worked my hands far pass there capabilities. I believe that I'm a pretty fine man and that one day that I will love my children as mush as my father and mother did... Me and my friend has a group, he does music, rap, making beats, and videos. I help out there and here for the music, raps, and videos. I used to rap myself and we go way back. I join the team and he wants me to lead the poetry side and I agreed. If anyone wants to join, then email me at [email protected] and I'll see what you got. Check out my page: https://www.facebook.com/MafiThePoet

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Comments (6)

Mafi Grey
<p>Thank you, I learned to look at the good thing in life; to find the good in people who are lost and trrobile. To express what I'm feeling and to stand up for what I believe is right. To defend others and to know when to walk away from a battle that doesn't need to be carried out. To help those who hurt you becaue they need it more than you. I known as the most genours of people and kind because sometimes people dont deserve what I give or show them; I dont do it for an reward but to set an example for others to follow in my footsteps. I do the thing i do and write what I mean because if I dont, who will? I am glad you took my advice and I can't wait to read more of your work, to see what you have changed and what you have delvoped.</p>
powerful.imani
<p>You are so right because my mind judge me only to make me better and i failed to listen to my mind which could have saved my heart from destruction. I love all you poetry you are such a creative and outstanding.</p><p><span style="color:#ff0000;"><strong>Check out my new poems &nbsp;and i been taking your advice to write more on how i feel so tell how you feel and advice thank you so much&nbsp;</strong></span></p>
Mafi Grey
<p>Thanks&nbsp;</p>
Eunoia
<p>I like it,, very thoughtful</p>
poeticmindset7
You must have had to have been through alot. i have been through alot so i know the difference between intelligence, knowledge and wisdom. Good sir, You hold them all very close to your heart. You're appreciated.
Mafi Grey
Please comment as much as you can. It motivates me to write, when i have an audience behind me. Thanks

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